Thursday, December 1, 2011

Lead #2- The House on the Rock

Write a strong lead for this picture.

17 comments:

  1. Zachary


    I have ben sailing from moths to find the wright house. Then sodnly I have fond it. There it was sitting there.

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  2. noah

    I have been sailing for days and running out of hope. It's almost time for dinner until I see land but not just ordinary land it's a house on a rock.

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  3. Parker
    they was a crime and the cop was me we went and took him to prison he broke out so we took him in a armored vehicle to here.

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  4. Patrick

    I was sailing along the water and had not seen land for weeks. Then one day we saw some land and a big rock but it was not just a rock there was a house carved in the to the top of the rock.

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  5. Mr. O.

    We had been traveling for five days across the hot, windy sea. Finally it appeared before us. The place where we would drop off our prisoners- Rock Island Prison. The worst prison in the world.

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  6. Lexi
    I was there I saw it all with my own two eyes . It was all me alone so I tried to do it I did me myself but it was very strange how to get up there i got closer all the sudden I hered a CRACK I backed up far away from the edge.

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  7. Cooper C.
    I've been sailing for days counting every day we haven't found land. Then while I was scanning the area. When I found It but it was not any ordinary land there was a house built in it.

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  8. Adam.

    It had stood for years and it was finally losing hope. That house was finally going to die out. They needed to find something else and fast.

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  9. I was sailing for about a year i was on my way home i was looking for something out of this world,But i never found it. But then i came across a house on a rock. I saw police men taking prisoners up to it. It was strange but i think i found the perfect thing.
    Ava

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  10. grace l.

    we were going to see my aunt and uncle when we arrived at 2569 there address we looked at the house it was not normal not normal at all it was on top of a rock how strange?

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  11. Hampton

    The House On The Rock

    1,000,000 years ago there was an island where a house stood. Over time the water lowered more and more until the island, was discovered, ONCE MORE... . . . . . .

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  12. Ryan y


    It was a night a dark night i was on a boat eating dinner, i couldn't belive it.My eyes i almost passed out when i saw it i saw a home.

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  13. So we have alot of prisoners and where sailing to find a jail. Then we found it.

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  14. I was on a sail boat for about 7 days without food our water until i saw it strange was it a rock or a house oh its a rock house I heard something was I alone or I see a fin.

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  15. We were finally leaving that cold stone house. I've always hated that old swig just hanging from a vine. But where will we move a hut, a den what?

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  16. Michael

    It had been two weeks since my ship sunk. I have been hanging to a board as the ocean carries me. I had given up hope. Then, the fog lifted and I saw an amazing sight. I had to climb that mountain but then I saw a rope hanging from a window and there I saw my destiny.

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  17. I was just paddling around the lake when I saw a huge rock.So I looked up. There on top of the rock was a house! I claimed the rock till I reached the top . On the house ther was some moss. Was this house abandon?And who could possibly live here?

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