Thursday, December 1, 2011

Leads #3 The Path



Write a strong lead for this picture.

10 comments:

  1. Adam

    He had lost everything.He was done,everything was done.He had lost all of it.

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  2. Grace L.

    I was walking down this path and i heard birds chirping and frogs croaking but then i heard this strange strange noise it sounded like a growl what was it i was i was not going to stop till i find out?

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  3. It was dark & the wind cut through my hair almost taring it out. I heard a twig snap soft breathing on my neck, a low growl Was I alone?


    By Mikaela

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  4. Trevor
    So one day me and my family went to take a walk. Then I snuck away to play a joke. Then I found a path.what happens next read on to find out.

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  5. Arionna

    It was a cold windy day and there was a girl named Bella she was looking for a place to rest but all she saw was trees all around her but then she felt something on her neck she turned around but there was nothing behind her then she kept walking she felt it again so she ran and ran she found a place.

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  6. Claire.R

    Hi the first thing you should know about me is that i am homeless without a family i have been searching for days to find this magic tunnel- STOP GET YOUR HANDS OF OF ME.

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  7. I was walking through a path, suddenly i heard footsteps behind me. So i quickly looked behind me and looked back but nothing was there.I thought it was just my imagination so i kept on walking and thinking it was ok but then i heard it again and this time i felt a small breath on my neck.I looked back again and nothing was there but i looked forward and i saw a guy staring at me so i turned around and ran to savety but i don't know if I'm safe.

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  8. noah

    I am walking through the woods I hear the wind blow the leafs off the trees I am scared alone and don't know where to go and then I hear something hooooo hooooo.

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  9. Cooper C.
    I was walking when I heard this big CRACK! I looked back then this 10 foot bull man minatar thing was there. I pulled out my sword and tried to scare it off. It wasn't scared at all. Then I drew my bow and shot arrows at it then...

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  10. Madisen

    i was on a path but it was a magical path i could here loud sounds i listened to the wind.i saw a turtle crossing a path and then it gone i felt the wind threw me i went in there where the turtle was and then.

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