Someone snuck into the pumpkin patch and sprayed the pumpkins with poison.Then that same person, squished those poor pumpkins flat then ran away, and never returned.
BY:ANDREW JACOB SLETTEN GOOD ONE I saw a pumpkin patch but none of them were good but then I saw a 10 ft. high and wide pumpkin that was all ready carved it was perfect but then it grabed me.
i was walking through the pumkin patch when the grim reaper appeared out of nowhere and the i screamed and ran but then i forgot my pumpkin i ran and broke the grim reapers nose and then i ran and fell :(
"I'm going to pick pumpkins!" my sister bragged. "i don't care!" i said. as you can see we were going to pick pumpkins."do we have to?" i asked."yes," mom said. as we got in the pickup i felt a cool breeze through my hair. when we got to the patch i felt it again."brrrrr," my sister said as i put my jacket on. molly immediatly ran into the patch and fell down on a tiny pumpkin and a very disturbing sound came from underneith her. CRRRRAAAAACCCCKKK! I looked at her for one last time and then she disapeared."MOM!" I screamed. mom was gone too. for the first time in my life i was completly alone.
One night I went to the pumkin patch I saw something move out of the corner of my eye. by Ashley
ReplyDeletebad lead:
ReplyDeleteI see a lot,
yes I do.
I see a lot,
yes I do.
good lead:
so many pumpkins,
many indeed.
many so scary,
so much on halloween!
-NANCY DREW
My bad lead is terrible!!!!
I see a orange blur in the distance, It's a large field of squash No it's a million pumpkins WOW!
ReplyDeleteBY:JOSH KLINE
They are sad cause they haven't been bought.
ReplyDeleteAR
I see a bunch of pumpkins.
ReplyDeleteThere once was a little apple orchord
ReplyDeletewich of course had tons of pumpkins and apples. weak comment
there once was an apple orchord who had a record for having the most pumpkins in the world along with apples of course.
Jasmine
I see a bunch of pumpkins.
ReplyDeleteBY:JOSH KLINE
Good lead:I look around all I can see is PUMPKINS!!!Some big some small. But I WANT THEM ALL!Or not their coming for ME! Bad lead:I see pumpkins.
ReplyDeletePiggy (Gabe)
The pumpkins got so rotten, they got squished.
ReplyDeleteSomeone snuck into the pumpkin patch and sprayed the pumpkins with poison.Then that same person, squished those poor pumpkins flat then ran away, and never returned.
by: DANA REINERT
Pumpkins are orange some are white
ReplyDeleteif you leave a pumpkin outside when
it is cold it will turn brown.
by Chad
Bad lead;I saw orange pumpkins.
ReplyDeleteGood lead;I saw big and small pumpkins fat and skinny all of them were orange and had handle's.And then I saw the perfect one.
J Curti
Jacob
ReplyDeletegood lead:
two lovers where walking through a pumpkin patch when he said will you marry me ? and then she slapped him accross the face and left
bad lead:
will you marry me
Kate R.
ReplyDeleteGood lead:
I'm going to a pumpkin patch.When I got there,there wasn't that much pumpkins as I thought there woud be...?
Bad lead:
I like pumpkins.
BY:ANDREW JACOB SLETTEN
ReplyDeleteGOOD ONE
I saw a pumpkin patch but none of them were good but then I saw a 10 ft. high and wide pumpkin that was all ready carved it was perfect but then it grabed me.
Max A.
ReplyDeleteShould I be in here, should I be in the pumpkin patch by the hounted house.
Ella
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I love to carve pumkins! I do it all the time with my dad. mine always are sooooo scary on holloween!
Jacob
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i was walking through the pumkin patch when the grim reaper appeared out of nowhere and the i screamed and ran but then i forgot my pumpkin i ran and broke the grim reapers nose and then i ran and fell :(
bad lead:
I fell
Natalie
ReplyDeletebad lead
pumkins!!!!
Good lead
I was in the pumkin pacth .
it was a wonderful day .i bought a pumkin for halloween. I brought it home.
Nice comment Jacob!
ReplyDeleteNice comment Jacob!
ReplyDeleteBrayden
ReplyDeleteBad lead:
I like Pie!
Good lead:
So many pumpkins, many indeed.
Many so scary, so much on halloween!
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"I'm going to pick pumpkins!" my sister bragged. "i don't care!" i said. as you can see we were going to pick pumpkins."do we have to?" i asked."yes," mom said. as we got in the pickup i felt a cool breeze through my hair. when we got to the patch i felt it again."brrrrr," my sister said as i put my jacket on. molly immediatly ran into the patch and fell down on a tiny pumpkin and a very disturbing sound came from underneith her. CRRRRAAAAACCCCKKK! I looked at her for one last time and then she disapeared."MOM!" I screamed. mom was gone too. for the first time in my life i was completly alone.