Monday, October 29, 2007

Lead #3- Bananas


Write one strong lead and one weak lead for a story inspired by this picture.

17 comments:

  1. Good lead:
    I was driving threw Italy, with a trunk full of bananas. Bad thing is bananas are illegal here, in Italy.

    Bad lead:
    Stop! Yelled the cops. You have a truck full of illegal bananas!

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  2. Sorry I meant that my bad lead was my good lead and my good lead was my bad lead.

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  3. Okay I think they are both good so maybe you should decide.

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  4. Hemlock It was a sunny day about 3:00 P.M when I heard something behind me but when I turned around all I saw was a barrel of bananas?!? It was sunny I heard a noise I saw a banana.

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  5. I was chasing dirty Dan in a ferarii. He was in a hummer. He crashed in to a motercicle. I checked the back. He stole a bundle of bananas.




    A guy died because of bananas.

    by:Tito the great

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  6. Sorry if I wrote so much. I just kept
    writing and could not stop so I will
    stop now.

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  7. Sorry I meant That my bad lead was my good lead and my good lead was my bad lead.

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  8. I didn`t mean to write that it did it itself. SO sorry!

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  9. Jacob
    good lead

    i was looking through the window when my mom said come unload the bannas. I yelled and ran in my room. the truth was im allergic to bannas.but noone knows. :)

    bad lead:ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
    hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
    hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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  10. Mr. O
    Good Lead:
    Screeeech! Crash! The sound of tires skidding on asphalt made me look to the street. I saw it happen, a car crash. The trunk of the blue car popped open from the impact. People from the street gathered around and gasped at the car's contents- bananas.

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  11. Good Lead:

    One day I went to a grocer store I went to the banana aisle there one banana left there was someone going after it I dove and skidded I yelled I GOT IT, IN YOUR FACE, the fight began!

    Bad story: I went to the store I got the banana OW!!!!!!!!

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  12. Ella
    good lead

    I love bannanas! they are so tasty. and helthy!

    bad lead

    bannanas are good.

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  13. Kate R.
    Good Lead:
    I was going to my car.When I got in the car there was a funky smell...?

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  14. I was driving down howchak st. Japan with a trunk of bannas witch is ilegle and won droped out with a cop be hind me and he pulled out a hand gun and started to shoot!And then my sidkick graped ashotgun and I said ware the poop did you get that and he stared to shoot the shoot of had begun!

    We diveing down the road and we started shooting at a cop and he sarted sooting back. by evan richter

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  15. Max A.

    As I was driving with my bananas a fog started to lift ,I couldent see anything and move.

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  16. Well every one elses was good!

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  17. natalie

    bad lead

    bannas!!1


    Good lead

    We ate bannas at the store [free samples] yummy

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