Thursday, December 1, 2011

Leads #4- Elephants at the Watering Hole

Write a strong lead for this picture.

10 comments:

  1. I ran crashing through the trees, stumbling over vines and rocks. I fell. My hand is bloodied. I cannot stop. They are getting closer. I am almost there.

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  2. They were coming, all of them.But then it happened,things had finally turned his way,the watering hole.

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  3. Parker



    I was with my friends in the woods. then i look back and they were gone i stared running and I new i was getting chased and this place

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  4. Patrick

    I was walking through the forest searching for some animals. I had been walking for hours and finally I saw a opening.

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  5. grace l.

    i saw elelfants tons if not 20 of them what an amazing sight there were tons of palm trees and rocks also water.

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  6. Noah

    I am running and pushing away branches and then I see a pond and.....

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  7. Arionna

    There it was the most wonderful sight of all,its the water hole with its land of happiness the trees and grass and the water like freedom but, i cant stay at all something is coming its big its mean its terrifying.

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  8. Traveling for months to find the water hole but anxiously looking i never found it i thought i new were it was but i guess i didn't will i get luck i will never know.
    Ava

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  9. I was screaming and blowing down trees when I was alone on a hot sunny day in the middle of a rain forest my head was blowing off my hair I heard a noise I it was a cop I was now running faster then I lost him I walked more then there it was the elephants watering hole.


    lexi

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  10. Cooper C.
    Me and my dad were on a hunting trip. We saw an animal we couldn't identifi it but when we tried to it attacked it was a lion it killed one of the people in our group. When we were chasing it we tried to shoot it then boom we hit an eliphent.

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