Tuesday, October 21, 2008

Lead #2- The Path


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21 comments:

  1. by nightmare
    here i stand at the entrace on a path its late at night and i just heard the clock stike midnight as a start to walk i here a noise...

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  2. I was waking along a path then i came around the corner and i saw a hole.Then i went to the hole and went threw the hole and saw a giant lake

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  3. Brendan D.

    while i was walking through the path 'it kind of looked like a tunnel' late at night all of a sudden i here a strange noise

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  4. matt b. I am running through woods all of the sudden I come to a path.It looks like it never ends.At one point I thought I was being watched.Then I hear a stick crack.

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  5. lilli

    As I was waking threw the dark woods I was alone at night I heard A screaming noise in the woods but I saw A bat leading to A dark scary PATH!

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  6. By Rachel

    I was walking Then I came to this path and I saw That it looked like a black hole. I heard a girl scream. When I walked some more I saw a girl.

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  7. mmmiiiccchhhaaaeeelll
    I stand here, staring down this amazing path. It is so cool I can't even believe it. Here I go...

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  8. By Garrett

    I was walking through the woods and I heard the leaves rustle behind me. I looked backwards,I screamed, and ran.

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  9. i was biking along a path i trip in front of a tunel. And heard a starng nose goming from the woods

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  10. Guy One day I went though a forest. Then I saw a big wall of trees. I struggled to get past them. then I went though there saw a long path. I saw some thing on the path it was a..............

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  11. As i wash i was hiking i heard a scream of horror i saw it it was King Kong.

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  12. Ryann B.
    One day I was taking a walk. In the nice cool breeze . I came among a long circle like path. It was as long as I could see. Scared and frightened I walked in the path.

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  13. by jack w It was normal day and there was one hour left of school and a kid past me a note it said there was an old path in my neiborhood so after school I went down the path and all of a sudden I saw some rustling in the bushes so I went to go check it out and looked above to see the most terrifing thing I EVER SAW I WAS SO SCARED I COULD NOT MOVE.

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  14. by nightmare [aka mattie]
    im almost done runing a race when i slipped and stumbed of the track. my heart is beating fast and in one second i'm back in the race.i run ans run untill im past everyoneim in first but its close5 feet away from the finish line...

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  15. ES & Mr. O:

    Once upon a time there was a enchanted path. The walkers of this path could cross water without sinking. Where did this path lead? To find out you must read!

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  16. rahni w. one day i was walking. in a dark forest all alone. i saw a old shed i opened the door. their was nothing in it i steped out. of the shed and kept walking and mist started to apair. i felt a cold hand on my shoulder i turned around. i screamed and started running and i fell.

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  17. By Leo

    I was riding my bike on a bike path when I fell down a hill that was never there.Then I heard a ton of ghostly sounds.Then I screamed!

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  18. As i was walking through the clearing woods.I walked and walked then i saw a whole then i went inside a then a walked then a saw t he hole over and over then suddenly. by zhylene

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  19. here i walked in the strange scary shed of woods.Then i heard a silent noise in my ear it felt like some body was standing beside me.then all of the sudden i saw i huge whole i ran inside the cove and hide in the darkness. By enelyhz,zhylene

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  20. im walking down a path and i see a secret opening as a crawl in i fell a hand on my shoulder...by nightmare[aka mattie]

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  21. I stand at the entrance of the maze. I have to get my baby brother back. Then I hear noise behind me as the maze closes.
    By: Torch (aka MollyH.)

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