Tuesday, October 21, 2008

Lead #1- Elephants at the River


Write a strong lead for this picture.

16 comments:

  1. Mr. O:
    Hurtling through jungle I threw myself through the tangled brush. As the brush gave way, I landed with a thud on my chest. Looking up, with dirt on my lips, I was startled to see the elephants in the river.

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  2. is a run through the jungle i see elephants and there coming toward me i run away as fast as i can with my eyes squeezed shut. when open them its dark and i'm on the ground...

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  3. By Owen D.

    As I crash through the brush,I look up at a huge herd of elephants.
    They start charging at me I run like the wind,I just made it out alive!

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  4. matt b. I am walking through a african dessert I see these big gray blobs.But then I notice that there really elephants.

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  5. michael

    I stand here, and all of a sudden i see an elephant. then I see another one then another, then i see a huge flock of elephants guarding a huge, huge pond that already has some elephants in it. Then I got suspicious...

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  6. By RIK

    When I was walking I saw a river and in the river there where elephants. I went over to them and it came up to me.

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  7. zach b:
    As I was swimming in what I thougt was an empty body of water I looked up to see at least ten elephants staring at me as if they were going to attack. I tried to stay still but they apparently saw me and charged.

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  8. I lay sipping out of a coconut in the mild rainforest when I heard a crack I suddenly felt uneasy as the ground started shaking. I ran as fast as I could my feet boiling in the sun as I reached the elephants a sharp word came into my head I shuddered in astonishment. The volcano.

    By: Molly Henley

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  9. zhylene.e

    As i was walking through the woods.I saw a huge cave i went in then all of the sudden.I heard a loud noise.Then I looked at behind me there was a a group of huge elephant following me.

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  10. By: Megan M.

    I was running through the jungle then
    I stumbled on a rock in to the river then I stood up and saw a huge herd of elephants.

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  11. by:Grant.S.H I was swimming in a river when all of a satin I hit a rock but when I looked up it was not a rock it was a angry elephant.

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  12. By Squrit a.k.a Kate
    I was on a addvencher in the Jungel I was running for my life. I fell I saw a group of elephants.

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  13. I was playing with my friends with our ball.then i drop the ball down the huge hill.Then my friend was scared so i have too get it by myself i went down then suddenly. I saw a huge plain hot desert.there was a huge deck of elephant starring at me.Good ting i bought lots of peanut with me so i was a little scared so a slowly throw the peanuts to them.

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  14. I am running through the jungle and all of a sudden I see a huge herd of hungry elephants and they are walking toward me!!! mn42

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  15. Here I am looking at the elephants in the river.
    RB 4-2

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