Thursday, October 25, 2012

Talking Lead


This lead begins with dialogue.

Example:
"Quick, hit the floor!" my dad yelled. "Whatever you do, don't look up!" my mother added as I dropped to the floor and slid myself under my bed. It was a terrifying night for my family when we discovered a bat in our house.

Write a lead in the comment section about:
  • Opening a present
  • Going on an airplane for the first time
  • Finding out your best friend is moving

22 comments:

  1. "Oh, no. That's the worst news I've ever heard." I told my friend. "You can't move.
    Mr. O

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    1. "Dad, this is the best gift ever!" I said when I got a longboard.
      jack

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  2. "o my gosh you shoulden't have thank you thank you thank you."my sister said"no problem sis" i said.

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  3. "Why that's the worst news in the galaxy.My friend is moving to NYC and we're in the state Montana.Why did this happen to me.

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  4. "You know what I'll tell you on the bus." Mason said. "No! tell me now!" "I'm moving." Mason said sadly. "What? NO! You can't move your my best friend!"

    Michael

    (Real story)

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  5. Getting on the first airplane,

    "I can't wait to get on the plane!"I'm on the plane and we are starting to lift off". "We are in the air it feels so different.
    Mitch

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  6. Opening a present

    Thanks for the present I said. There is 1 more present. It is from Blake. Wonder what it could be? Well open it! said my friend.All right, here goes nothing I said.

    Santi

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  7. oh no you cant be a alien you could of told me earlier. now the FBI is after you.

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    1. oh no you cant be a alien you could of told me earlier. now the FBI is after you.

      ''LUKE

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  8. best friend moving


    "Oh no you can't move I don't want you to." I told my friend. "Sorry I have to." She said. But she ended up moving.
    Callie

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  9. "your moving"I said "I have to my dad has to work there"."How long are you going to be there"."about a year"I saw that they were already packing.She was going to move to Hawaii.

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  10. "Thank yo sis!" No problem. I am going to have fun with this motor bike. I owe you something sis!

    chandler

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  11. "Hay best friend! Do you want to come over today? I can't. Why? I don't want to tell you. Tell me what? I'm MOVING! NOOOOOO! Brieanna

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  12. "Your moving"I said "I have to my dad has to work there"."How long are you going to be there"."about a year"I saw that they were already packing.She was going to move to Hawaii.

    Ellie

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  13. First airplane ride
    "Ahhh!"I screamed. The airplane had just taken off."I'm scared mama/mom can we get off"? "No sweetpea. The airplane ride is not over yet. Then I thought"what if we are stuck in here forever?"

    Kate

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  14. birth day party

    ''Happy birth day ''! are the first words i heard , as i was telling my friend brieanna . i look around the room , flightless balloons where every wear all spreed out on the floor ! i scream 'BEST DAY EVER'!!!!!!

    kacey

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  15. Why my friend is moving to Florida. I'm going to barf. take with you pleas I beg you take me with you.bye I'm going to miss you Hank

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  16. Thares no whay I will let you move!! I sed. Sory my parents disded not me. I cant beleve this. And I am going to see for my self.

    From
    Clare

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  17. Opening a present.

    "Wow!" I said to my mom. "This is the best present ever!!""I had been wanting for this for 100 years! My mom said."Your being silly! You have been waiting for 1 mounth!"

    Bella

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  18. Why my friend is moving to Florida. I'm going to barf. take with you pleas I beg you take me with you.bye I'm going to miss you. Hank

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  19. OPENING A PRESENT

    "Thank you"! I said "It will go well with my room". I told my mom,looking at my new horse picture.

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