Thursday, October 25, 2012

Action Lead


This lead involves the reader by starting with an exciting event or some kind of action.

Example:
I threw on my favorite red dress and scrambled down the stairs as fast as I could. It was my 8th birthday, and I couldn't wait for the party to begin.

Write a lead in the comments section about one of the following:
  • Your favorite activity in Phy. Ed. class
  • A spy
  • An athletic event (game, sport, play)

17 comments:

  1. (Favorite Phy.Ed. class)

    Smash! "OH! That urt so much! But I still want to roller skate." I got up and started to roller skat again. "Look out!" The skater came right into my face. "OUCH!"

    Michael

    (Real story)

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  2. Doctor Ball

    Throw it yelled, Thomas.There was 1 more pin left. I was about to throw but then...


    Santi

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  3. EEERRRRR!!! The buser yelled. The game was over. My team won!!!

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  4. favorite activity in Phy. Ed.

    "Is your favorite activity in gym doctor ball." Cause mine is.The girls always win when we are against the boys cause we have the teachers on our team

    Callie

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  5. Mr. Piccioli hit Thomas in the legs. Thomas fell over.
    jack

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  6. dodge ball.Mr.O hit dylan in the legs dylan fell over and he was out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! jazzy

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  7. EEERRRRR!!! The buser yelled. The game was over. My team won!!!
    Mitch

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  8. Mr. Piccioli hit Thomas in the legs. Thomas fell over. All the best players are out, and one pin is down.
    jack

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  9. "Get over here said flash."I used my spike gloves to climb on top of the wall. whats the matter i said. The army of evil ninjas are almost ready. So we do not have much time to blow up the base.

    chandler

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  10. spy

    kacey

    'Get down they can't see us ' i heard the voice of brieanna my fellow spy.

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  11. DOCTOR BALL
    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! I yelled I dodged it good Amelia took 1 to the head. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I yelled again. Don't do that. WE WON!! WE started a new game, Mr.O and Mr.P were on the boys team so I wispered Mr.O don't hit me!! Everyone laughed. Seirously Don't hit me!! But they were on are team!

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  12. ''oh my gosh the game was over we won now we went to carboneys.



    ''LUKE

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  13. "Smack" my roller skate hit the cone then I fell on the ground then I got bask up and started skating.
    Ellie

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  14. I was sneaking up on Dr. Chicken bong nasty and then he scared the cheese balls out of me! brieanna

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  15. DOCTOR BALL
    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! I yelled I dodged it good Amelia took 1 to the head. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I yelled again. Don't do that. WE WON!! WE started a new game, Mr.O and Mr.P were on the boys team so I wispered Mr.O don't hit me!! Everyone laughed. Seirously Don't hit me!! But they were on are team!
    GRETA

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  16. Is swimming your sport?
    I whizzed through the water and past all my team mates that would be a mirical "I'm...

    kate

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