This lead hooks the reader by starting with an event or some kind of action focusing on sound.
Example:
Smash! The window cracked, the wind howled, and the door flung open. Rain poured in through the screen, drenching the welcome mat inside our house. I will never forget the fierce storm that invaded my house last night.
In the comments section write a lead about some type of storm: blizzard, hurricane, tornado, thunderstorm.
BLIZZARD
ReplyDeleteWOOSH!! The door blew open as if someone pounded the door down. The snow made the house like a winter wonder land! It was so strong it seemed like a hurricane took over the house. More and more snow shot threw the door. the wind was like a tornado...
BLIZZARD
ReplyDeleteWOOSH!! The door blew open as if someone pounded the door down. The snow made the house like a winter wonder land! It was so strong it seemed like a hurricane took over the house. More and more snow shot threw the door. the wind was like a tornado...
GRETA
woosh!the wind howled the snow pored into my house.bang! the door flung open.crack! the snow broke my window and pored into my room. snowstorm jazzy
ReplyDelete"Boom! the door cracked open the wind was howling.The rain poured in throw the door i will never forget that thunder storm.
ReplyDeletebeau
Thunderstorm
ReplyDeleteGet in! yelled my dad. It was a big thunderstorm. I ran as hard as I could. But then i slipped. It hurt so bad. What will I do dad?
Santi
C-R-A-S-H!! Went a tree fell right on our boat. Our boat is broke I yelled.
ReplyDeletemitch
WEEEEee! "What was that about?" I said to myself. POP POP POP! "What's up with the lights? And what's that loud noise?" I looked out the window. "TORNADO!" My brother yelled in my ear surprisingly.
ReplyDelete"AHHHHHHHHHHHH!" I yelled runnning to the basement. That was night of nightmares.
Michael
(Real story)
Thunderstorm
ReplyDeleteBoom, Crack, Flash it was a thunderstorm. It was raining very hard. I had to stay inside all day.
Callie
AAAAAAAAAAAAH"I screamed when I heard the LOUD thunder and that lighting bombing threw the dark sky. I was stunned when the storm hit. my older brother Joe and his friend were with me. we tried to go outside. but it was to deadly Me Joe and his friend Andrew thought the power was going out. well it did for 5 seconds. it was about 7.45 we were stuck inside we were bord. my mom could not cook becuase she was worried the power will come off. so she orderd pizza after that we watched TV. and stayed up to 10.30 then the power turned off for ten minutes my dog was hiding under the bed becuase she was scared
ReplyDeleteDtsh! Splash! Aaaah! As the sea storm wind howled outside of Captain Soto's cabin, he wrote in his log that he had blundered through the storm for three days and three days more.
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