Tuesday, October 21, 2008

Lead #4- Girl Among Plants


Write a strong lead for this picture.

6 comments:

  1. wen i was climing on a mouten i fell. landed on my bum in a lilypad swamp. linnea

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  2. michael man

    i stand here in a huge, huge garden with huge vines. then I see a huge girl and she has huge, ugly fang teeth. Then i look at her face...

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  3. i just ran away frum home i found my self in a lilypad swamp. i was just making a handmok with my bare hands.linnea

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  4. By Abby L.

    I was in the creek minding my une bisness as it hit me. The,the,the monster. I got up and started to run it was about to get me as as as I do not want to spoil it for you

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  5. -By Kate Henley
    I was floating along a river filled with shallow, muddy water. I was half awake, yet it felt like I was fully asleep. I dozed off dreaming of wonders, gold and silver. I heard a frog croaking in the distance and woke slightly. In my blurry view, I saw a dark green figure coming towards me. I rubbed my eyes, thinking that it was a figment of my imagination. The blurry figure was coming closer, until I realized it was a leaf. A large lillypad leaf spattered with red clay.

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  6. I wake up on a raft floating in a lilypad garden when I suddenly crash into a giant leaf I look around this time cautious. Then I relax again and look at my surroundings. Leafs,leafs, and a girl. By:Molly Henley

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